Post #5376

#review the bearing braced walls shuddered, shattered, shredded not completely though there are yet seeds to be sowed in the heavenly abode drop by drop, soon in rivers, chaotic blood flowed from the structure's doors that now shut open rivers in abandoned arbitrary flow drop by drop, it stopped too Bloooooooddddd not the sparkling red glitters but just the no r m a l endometrium maybe crimson paint spilled on the canvas but more b e a u t i f u l n beyond this structure, not only has walls but there's this boss lady who makes all the calls from the entry to exists carrying on the proceedings she comes once a month to collect what is solely hers upon not getting what she deserves she ends up creating a bloody mess & chaos she is no harm, she means no harm she is just here to calm you through the storms she wants you to believe her, promising that flowers will too bloom, pls hold on till spring I have tried to metaphor "menstruation" here, stating the uterus as a kind of structure where there is lady (ovum) who takes all the decisions. But I am really not sure if I succeeded. Also I wanted to add a paragraph about how this structure will be a (king)dom or a fort(ress). I also wanted to convey more how it is beautiful n symbolic to life & not focus on society's prohibitions & perspectives Please review this for me, and lemme know if it makes sense. Thank You :) #review