LA REVISIONE DEI TESTI - EDITING✍🏻📕
"Non esistono grandi scritture, ma solo grandi riscritture".
#scrittura#writingtips
✍🏻Prendine atto: non puoi fare a meno di rivedere quello che scrivi, è nella fase della revisione che miglioriamo davvero il testo.
✅ L’editing è una FORMA MENTALE: richiede duttilità di pensiero. Non attaccarti a quello che hai scritto, se è il caso modifica.
✅ L’editing è NECESSARIO, sempre.
✅ L’editing deve essere inteso come IL TEMPO DEL MIGLIORAMENTO.
✅ Il PRIMO EDITING lo deve fare l’autore.
✅ Per fare bene editing è necessario DISTACCAMENTO dal testo altrimenti non sarà mai efficace.
✅ Bisogna DISTINGUERE editing sui tuoi testi dall’editing che potresti fare sui testi degli altri. Cambia del tutto l’approccio. Se analizzo un testo di un altro devo mettermi sulla stessa lunghezza d’onda dell’altro, non devo entrare con i miei gusti, con il mio “mi piace” se no sbaglierei del tutto il lavoro di editing.
✅ L’EDITING AGISCE SUL CERVELLO: quando correggiamo i nostri testi stiamo lavorando sul risultato del pensiero, sul pensiero che ha preso forma. Andare ad agire su quelle parole per migliorarle significa agire sulle connessioni neuronali. Ci pensiamo? Quanto bene faccia alla nostra espressività, al nostro patrimonio intellettuale l’editing?
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#Celsius Network further deposited 34.09M $MATIC ($25.7M) to #Binance in the past 10 hours.
In the past 2 days, Celsius Network has deposited 56.8M $MATIC ($44.5M) to Binance at $0.784 on average.
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#Celsius Network returned to deposit 8,091 $ETH ($24.45M) to #Coinbase at ~$3,022 9hrs ago.
Notably, this is Celsius’ largest ETH deposit in the past 3 months. Previously, between Nov-13-23 and Jan-31-24, Celsius Network transferred 847,626 $ETH (~$1.90B) to FalconX, Coinbase, OKX, and Paxos, allegedly for some OTC deals.
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In the past 2 days, #Celsius further deposited 67,500 $ETH ($156.5M) to #Coinbase Prime.
Overall, Celsius Network has moved 847,626 $ETH (~$1.90B) to CEX since November 13, 2023. Some of these ETH tokens might have been absorbed by whales via an alleged OTC deal.
Today, Celsius announced the distribution of over $3 billion in crypto and fiat to creditors has begun!
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#Celsius Network deposited 25.75M $MATIC ($21.26M) to CEX at $0.826 on avg in the past 8 hours:
• 22.73M $MATIC ($18.79M) to #Binance
• 3.02M $MATIC ($2.47M) to #Crypto.com
Currently, Celsius Network still holds 34.09M $MATIC ($27.56M) in the address.
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🚨🚨#Celsius Network deposited 11,300 $ETH ($24.9M) to #Coinbase and #FalconX ~5hrs ago, as the $ETH price recovers.
Notably, in the past 4 days, Celsius Network has further deposited 48,200 $ETH ($108M, avg price: $2,240) to Coinbase and FalconX.
👉 More details: https://platform.spotonchain.ai/en/signal-details/celsius-network-deposited-eth-to-falconx-and-coinbase-13503
Two institutions #Celsius and #FTX moved out a total of $59.06M in 6 assets to CEX in the past 8 hours!
1. Celsius further moved 22,500 $ETH ($50.78M) to #Coinbase at $2,257 ~8 hours ago.
➡️ Now, Celsius only holds around 39,969 $ETH ($90.9M) in address 0xdb3.
👉 More details here
2. FTX and Alameda Research moved out $8.28M in 6 assets, including $ETH, $OKB, $MTL, $PROM, $YFII, and $CREAM in the past 2 hours.
➡️ Overall, FTX and Alameda Research have moved out $707M worth of 91 tokens since October 24, 2023.
👉 More details here
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🚨🚨 Note that both #FTX and #Celsius Network transferred $ETH out in the past hour:
1. #FTX 0xe39 transferred 1,500 $ETH ($3.09M) to Wintermute Trading:
- The FTX and Alameda addresses also moved out 7.64M MATIC ($5.74M), which may be deposited to exchanges soon.
👉 More details: https://platform.spotonchain.ai/signal-details/ftx-and-alameda-research-moved-eth-and-matic-out-8514
2. Celsius Network further transferred 5,000 $ETH ($10.3M) to middle addresses:
- In total, Celsius Network has transferred out 15,167 $ETH ($31.1M) in the past 15 days, after the price rose. Among them, 10,167 $ETH ($20.8M) have been deposited to #FalconX at an average price of $2,051.
👉 More details: https://platform.spotonchain.ai/signal-details/celsius-network-may-further-deposit-eth-to-exchange-soon-8504
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🚢Celsius усиливает СПГ-флот новым заказом на верфи Samsung Heavy.
Датская Celsius Tankers (часть Celsius Shipping) связана с новым заказом на два СПГ-танкера вместимостью по 180 000 куб. м на верфи Samsung Heavy Industries.
Контракт оценивается примерно в $514 млн, с поставкой до сентября 2028 года.
Сделка продолжает серию заказов компании и расширяет её портфель СПГ-судов, который уже насчитывает около 24 единиц (в эксплуатации и на стадии строительства).
С операционной точки зрения, компания усиливает позиции в сегменте СПГ (LNG) на фоне устойчивого спроса на газ и долгосрочных контрактов, обеспечивающих загрузку флота.
Для рынка это подтверждает высокий интерес к СПГ-новострою и ограниченность слотов на корейских верфях, что поддерживает стоимость судов.
📌Celsius Shipping ApS — основана в Дании, частная судоходная компания, специализируется на СПГ-перевозках; принадлежит предпринимателю Кристоферу Бисгаарду (Christoffer Bisgaard).
#LNG#Shipping#Tankers#Shipbuilding#Celsius
🚨 As predicted, #Celsius Network further deposited 9,600 $ETH ($19.5M) to #Coinbase and #OKX via address 0xc45 ~3hrs ago.
In total, Celsius Network has deposited 19,160 $ETH ($40.31M) to #FalconX, #Coinbase and #OKX at an average price of $2,040 in the past 16 days.
Currently, Celsius Network still allegedly holds around 59,581 $ETH ($121M) across multiple addresses.
👉 More details: https://platform.spotonchain.ai/signal-details/celsius-network-further-deposited-eth-to-exchanges-8736
🚨 Both #FTX and #Celsius transferred out $ETH after the $ETH price crossed $2,300 again today!
1. #Celsius Network deposited 7,500 $ETH ($17.4M) to #FalconX ~ 8hrs ago.
- Total deposited amount in past 7 days: 25,000 $ETH ($57M).
2. #FTX moved 1,593 $ETH ($3.66M) to address 0xCeF ~55 mins ago.
- Address 0xCeF currently holds 2,244 $ETH ($5.16M) and may deposit $ETH to #Coinbase soon.
👉 More details: https://platform.spotonchain.ai/en/token?name=ETH
🚨🚨 Institutions and whale are depositing $ETH to exchanges!
1. #Alameda (#FTX) and #Celsius Network deposited a total of 17,603 $ETH ($39.5M) to #Coinbase in the past 11 hours.
- Among them, 9,603 $ETH ($21.6M) were deposited to the exchange around the recent local peak!
2. Smart whale 0xebf returned after 5 months of inactivity and deposited 6,000 $ETH ($13.5M) to #Binance just now.
- Currently, the whale still holds 6,127 $ETH ($13.8M) and has an estimated total profit of $17M (+69.5%) from $ETH, of which $10.7M has been realized!
👉 More details: https://platform.spotonchain.ai/en/token?name=ETH