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Broken pencil, Broken stencil, Broken pen still, Writes to break hearts, To mend hearts. Broken ones are both fire and fog, Might burn you till you scream, Might choke you till you dream, They're both dangerous and beautiful, Might kill you and laugh, Might save you and cry, The question remains why, do they do this, Why do they misbehave? Maybe that's just what it is with the broken ones, They don't know themselves. -- विषेक #vishek #review

WATER AND FIRE Shower of beauty, Simple, cute and pretty Facing him is a dream desire A medicine that never expires Never felt exhausted She never felt tired Her smile brings peace to my soul Like water calming fire Every time in good mood She enjoyed her life entire I feel happy for her Like water calming fire Have I seen her I think not require What I get from her thoughts Is way more important Then the outer beauty That the world admires As she is a blessing There is no end to kindness She aquire Her smile brings peace to my sole Like water calming fire.. Like water calming fire..😊 #review #ansh2_4 #friendship

Dear folks, this is a translation of one famous poem of one famous poet into English. Can you please review it and let me know, if it sounds correct, or does it contain enything weird, odd ? /********************************************/ I like to feel that I'm not sick with you I like to know that sickness yours is yours not mine That heavy ball of earth won’t stray off from its course Away from our footprints , fading in sunshine I love that I could funny be Bewildered, clumsy , not wordplaying not turning red upon sleeves touching game not turning pale when see you on your knees I love to see you hugging someone else Before my eyes , reposefully and calmly Not sending me to fire glowing hell To burn forever for not kissing me , my darling I like that mentioning my name is not your habit That tender name you don't utter day-and-night in vain That no one's gonna sing Hallelujah on our wedding In silence of the church, one sunny autumn day Thank you for love, with all your heart and soul That brings me peace at night, unconscious, unaware Thank you for rare meetings if at all So nice, That never in the moonlight do we stroll So great that sun warms not us, soaring high elsewhere So pity, that I am not sick with you So bad, that sickness yours is yours not mine #review #friendship

A LETTER FOR YOU A letter which describe how much u r to me A letter saying that I miss u in every conversation I have someone. Thinking about how would have react, say. How we have laugh A letter saying that how I plan to go on every vacations with u A letter saying that whenever we fight.. How I check whether u r online or not every now and then A letter confessing you that I imagine u in every love story I see I read.. N u r shaping in my romantic fanasty A letter confessing u that u r not much to me.. U r whole of me.... U r the one whom I want everyday A letter from my heart saying ....u r my everything and nothing together #review#pain#PSP

WATER AND FIRE Shower of beauty, Simple, cute and pretty Facing him is a dream desire A medicine that never expires Never felt exhausted She never felt tired Her smile brings peace to my soul Like water calming fire Every time in good mood She enjoyed her life entire I feel happy for her Like water calming fire Have I seen her I think not require What I get from her thoughts Is way more important Then the outer beauty That the world admires As she is a blessing There is no end to kindness She aquire Her smile brings peace to my sole Like water calming fire.. Like water calming fire..😊 #review #ansh2_4 #friendship

Twenty years pass by Still thinking of her request Will you marry me? Thirty dozen times her mechanism I searching for true meaning Was so hard, beyond the ceiling Couldn't stop her advances And its not enough To tell me you'd care I should have tried, picturesque Her half piece of heart As it rejoined with my refurbished half For haven't felt this way At least for a younger lad in linen Seeing the passion right from the start Contemplated right to the star I feel so close to you now For that's where the destiny holds us Looking forward to embrace you Kiss you smoothly, hug you warmly Reflecting the union of a lifetime That we were destined for love #review #Linford #Destined for Love

A4 Djinns are in the counter Fulfilling your wishing Come to the mall Or Go online Discounts on things you never needed You want it, like Sugar Diabetic nation, how beautiful it is Hello there, the name is Luci You seem distraught You crying ? this tissue with military grade fabric might help This medicine for your mental health might help You want more of it, everything all at once Processed to the point of void at lunch The Authority is mine And the Hostile Fuckers are kneeling down throwing away their pride It’s nothing but Money #review#poetry

Contemporary Helplessness and Belated conceptions – Part A A1 What my soul looks at me, What do you see Mirroring features of people in street How degrading would it be If you roll out now on an chilling breeze If you texted and never Roll up your sleeves Don’t you see, every man is greed And every Penny is stolen Like those unfeasible please You know it’s guided destruction Your worth is more than molten Bodies under the sunlight reaping souls A virtuous suicide Kind of thinking when you eat It’s the stories of sunkissed memories And unfiltered adventures elders speak of You never feel in this sanitary ward. The rocks make you happy only How you live so long How you know so much of me ? Aren’t I buried you deep in that winter snow When unable to find her cost of life When unable to find a way of life How unable it felt when expectations That can’t be avoided as I did many before How young feel like How is it to feel old It’s a life of mediocre In a limbo of Money and gold A2 It’s not magic, it’s ravenous growth Over my shoulder, it’s cold and jittery You felt it when you touched And the phone’s battery is dead You want the cable, is it ? Nocturnes, playing silently ripping the lazuli In lights of unknown Won’t you wanna see it, One more time The speaker works as a charm like it used to Mariage d’amore Won’t your subtle sarcasm sting me One more time Won’t you come home with stiff shoulders And I sweep through your head as if Everything’s alright It ain’t much, but the home is an idea we cherished It’s not magic, it’s sweet like candies It’s Ruh Gulab, your presence is like a shadow Engulfing in unending embrace Eurydice, how might I not look to you again. How might I not mourn the instrumentality of this mortal chase It’s not as bad as the poet said It’s not killing to smoke cigarettes But there was a time you stopped me My threshold is in my pocket And my legacy is my debt. God bless me, as I end this chain. A3 Not everyone falls in love twice As Same is not the man, nor the love he conceived The cerulean sky this morning Brandishing memories those breakfasts she made Her hands were bruised as I saw her with turmeric laid on it. As a child, when I discovered eventually Loved ones go away, as my grandma on her deathbed I was scared but it past away. As I kneel for mercy oh lord. He takes away, with hands on hands They walk past my life like oh man Nature does fucks me up sometimes I was tied to Small ponds longing for an Oceanside Waves now blow me away again to the roots I had She said stories of witches and demons In the forest, they pull out my desire To showcase my propensity of violence Do they exist downtown In these Arches and columns In the Palace of Gods of Greece In this Malevolent magnificent System under the fleece. Sickly frost bites on the Whitest of the hearts. And I am the greatest pretender Of having a Say What I became is lesser than my parents Half my age. Youthful reveries of Assignment delays and procrastinating. Mirages of self accomplishments What they worth in value What value is love. Commodities on the Shelf On the corner is found a box of chocolates And a ring of platinum What price is love Quite a lot Rituals are there ? Quite a lot Boost to match up more Subscribe to the dating store. There are distances and alienations Yesterday I put a cap on a bottle Who knows what was in it. I ate a meal from microvave TV Dinner they say. And a glass of Gatorade What does that make of me. The Irritating questions of ambitions. Like as if existing wasn’t ambitious enough. #review#poetry

STEP 1 randomly comes nothing you should give your sole entire It's a game of life Just give it a good try Writing calm the sole Creativity is required Instead of writting everything Just go for something Don't get pressurize It's a game patience is required In the end it's you Who convert everything into new. Help your pen to impress The paper with the Thoughts that you aquire If anyone finds the message inside, may reply. #review #mystery #ansh2_4

Chapter 1:The cuckoo's nest The irksome sound coming from someone's radio , "it must be morning " i muttered , tho i dont usually wake up this early on a holiday like this , so i tried to cover myself in the warmth of blanket but not enough to insulate that annoying noise and so i gave up on my dream. The sun was dim today quite unusual day for a summer . A strong pingent smell caught my glemse , after using my brain and nose i was able to find the cordinates of its origin. "Its coming from my balcony "i shouted , I jumped out of my blanket and opened the balcony , There was a dead cuckoo lying on the floor , might have fallen from its nest . I usually come to see this cuckoo been feed by a small Canary , that was a quite appealing view to watch or rather entertaining. The decaying body of cuckoo was alluring alot of bugs and ants, "Someone will live on someone's death" i said on a quavering voice , My neighbour was also in his balcony watching that cuckoo's , his balcony was just 1 feet away from mine . Unlike me his balcony was been decorated with lot of flowers , pot were hanging on the side of his wall. A green fluffy carpet all over his wall, giving more athestic look to his balcony , on the other hand my balcony have alot of poops of the birds which i never bothered to clean , a rusty chair which got its rust by weting in the rain , some clothes hanging here and there , being just 1 feet away and paying the same rent there was a lot of difference in our balconies , or rather alot of difference in our personality . He usually come to water his plants tho we never talked before. After spending few more minutes in balcony gloring the blueness of sky , I went back to my room , my stomach was starving by the time , I quickly went to check on my fridge for something to eat , even my bad luck is unlucky ,it just contains some rotten yogurts , broken beer bottles , a pouch of sous which is expired , a frozen fish . I went to my kitchen and found that i was out of instant noodles too. #review #novel #suggestions

A Father put his 3 year old daughter to bed, told her a story and listened to her prayers which ended by saying, "God bless Mommy, God bless Daddy, God bless Grandma and good-bye Grandpa." Family joke The father asked, 'Why did you say good-bye Grandpa?' The little girl said, "I don't know daddy, it just seemed like the thing to do." The next day grandpa died. The father thought it was a strange coincidence. A few months later the father put the girl to bed and listened to her prayers which went like this, "God bless Mommy, God Bless Daddy and good-bye Grandma." The next day the grandmother died. "Holy crap" thought the father, "this kid is in contact with the other side." Several weeks later when the girl was going to bed the dad heard her say, "God bless Mommy and good-bye Daddy." He practically went into shock. He couldn't sleep all night and got up at the crack of dawn to go to his office. He was nervous as a cat all day, had lunch and watched the clock.. He figured if he could get by until midnight he would be okay. He felt safe in the office, so instead of going home at the end of the day he stayed there, drinking coffee, looking at his watch and jumping at every sound. Finally midnight arrived; he breathed a sigh of relief and went home. When he got home his wife said, "I've never seen you work so late. What's the matter?" He said, "I don't want to talk about it, I've just spent the worst day of my life." She said, You think you had a bad day, you'll never believe what happened to me. This morning my boss dropped dead in the middle of a meeting #story #review #humour

*No Gold , But A Rich Heart* Neither I've got gold nor Apple Products , my bad I couldn't afford , But destiny had planned something different , wants to send this scholar abroad ; Neither I've got smart watch nor new sneakers , If you underestimate my power , by challenging me , trust me , I'm the game changer ; Never got a chance to enter KFC or Starbucks , Still , everyday , on my door , a new glory knocks ; Till today , I use the same pencil box , brought by me seven years back , But still my pen never stops , my hand powerful enough to compete with time , fastest on the poetry track ; Never got a wireless headphone , still my ears are sharp , Topper of the batch , keen sense of listening , can detect any trap ; Not having crown of royalty , still my brain working in light speed , Curiousity to gain knowledge forever , pen and paper for poems , is all I need ; Maybe not a millionaire , but rich from my heart's core , Tranquil waves worth more than a billion , with me standing on the sea shore ... #review #prose