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I've been thinking of life And it was raining season Life is worse than the hell Why? Couldn't get reason How and when will i get rid From this unbearable pain People can shouting loudly I could not cry in the rain #ap#review#shortpoem

Longdrive You roll down the windshield, While I take the steering wheel, Humming to music & talking for countless hours, Let's disappear darling into a world far beyond the stars. Travelling through various time zones, Travelling across different landscapes, A place so mystical and bewitching, Where the moonlight ascends over the seawaves. From camping to passing sleepless nights, As we giggle,dance & cook together, Cherishing every moment & leaving no regrets, Making out love in the pleasant weather. To getting lost in the mystical land, With only the two of us, In a place so nice for a secret rendezvous, Though the outside powers might try to defy us. #review#poem#San

#review the bearing braced walls shuddered, shattered, shredded not completely though there are yet seeds to be sowed in the heavenly abode drop by drop, soon in rivers, chaotic blood flowed from the structure's doors that now shut open rivers in abandoned arbitrary flow drop by drop, it stopped too Bloooooooddddd not the sparkling red glitters but just the no r m a l endometrium maybe crimson paint spilled on the canvas but more b e a u t i f u l n beyond this structure, not only has walls but there's this boss lady who makes all the calls from the entry to exists carrying on the proceedings she comes once a month to collect what is solely hers upon not getting what she deserves she ends up creating a bloody mess & chaos she is no harm, she means no harm she is just here to calm you through the storms she wants you to believe her, promising that flowers will too bloom, pls hold on till spring I have tried to metaphor "menstruation" here, stating the uterus as a kind of structure where there is lady (ovum) who takes all the decisions. But I am really not sure if I succeeded. Also I wanted to add a paragraph about how this structure will be a (king)dom or a fort(ress). I also wanted to convey more how it is beautiful n symbolic to life & not focus on society's prohibitions & perspectives Please review this for me, and lemme know if it makes sense. Thank You :) #review

#review the bearing braced walls shuddered, shattered, shredded not completely though there are yet seeds to be sowed in the heavenly abode drop by drop, soon in rivers, chaotic blood flowed from the structure's doors that now shut open rivers in abandoned arbitrary flow drop by drop, it stopped too Bloooooooddddd not the sparkling red glitters but just the no r m a l endometrium maybe crimson paint spilled on the canvas but more b e a u t i f u l n beyond this structure, not only has walls but there's this boss lady who makes all the calls from the entry to exists carrying on the proceedings she comes once a month to collect what is solely hers upon not getting what she deserves she ends up creating a bloody mess & chaos she is no harm, she means no harm she is just here to calm you through the storms she wants you to believe her, promising that flowers will too bloom, pls hold on till spring I have tried to metaphor "menstruation" here. But I am really not sure if I succeeded. Also I wanted to add a paragraph about how this structure will be a (king)dom or a fort(ress). Please review this for me, and lemme know if it makes sense. Thank You :) #review

Tanka : 57577 I'm alone at my place Perhaps, someone will come here A beautiful lady, and Will take my hand in her hand Maybe will say I'm with you. #ap#review#tanka

For courage is letting go of the fears that you reside in and hope of a being Gasp until your heart aches for the warmth of the love it once shared Bawl to the agony of tragedy that flowed along with the blood through your veins Fall into the symphony Edvard Grieg once made Reach to the point of disgust and bathe in the trauma that surrendered to you its faith Exist in seventeen out of hundred of your fears For once, look closer into the mirror that is as real as it appears Leer at The Starry Night, no Vincent could ever paint Until your eyelids close to their suspense Oath to the pores that your skin ever veiled Behold the scars of your mother that never healed Go slow in the heads of horror Go deep in the dark philosophy in Arthur Schopenhauer’s honor Plead to the lord of misery, for great sufferings of ever beyond and more Wear the wisdom of the evil that history never wore And then, Let shadows of your beloved that long ago were burnt, sing you the last lullaby Sleep to never wake up again in the dream of demons, ode them the last goodbye Gather fragments of the courage you swore upon midst the million sufferings Open the doors once latched, let bright of your brain lit the horizon of infinite dreams #sans #review

#yourreview#review Could relate to the core! 'Filled with people deaf,dumb and blind' Simple and impactful and apt

Chaos. We all are lost in chaos. We know that, but we are frightened at finding ourselves face to face with this horrible reality. Furthermore, we often try to cover it over with a curtain of fantasy. There are people or circumstances we point finger at, and we be the best storyteller in the scenario. Reason could be anything our fear, our will, ability to accept reality, Lack of clarity and many more. We are not even going to look at this and accept it. We often hide behind the cloud of being in certain ideas which are not true, always uses them as trenches for the defense of our existence. Not only that, but we will be far away from reality and light years away from our self. It is not always about You vs them!! It is not even about you vs situation.!! At the end it is about your ability to facing the truth. Will you be able to adapt or not?? Will you be able to overcome or not?? About your mind works for you or you work for your mind.!! It is always about YOU vs YOU. One of the kindest thing you can do for ourselves is that we need to accept that we are lost. And if we have accepted that,we will begin to find ourselves. By finding ourselves we will find the center of strength within, and we will be different person all together. This is what our society needs rather than ideas and inventions. Always go a little further into the water than you feel you are capable of being in. Go a little out of your depth. And when you do not feel your feet are quite touching the bottom, you are just about in the right place to do something exciting. #review

#review you hve nicely penned down. Nice collection of words with the clarity. I enjoyed a lot reading this

Tanka : 57577 If I do any crime! If I hurt you more before: Will you forgive me? Like you forgave me before; I like you because of these. #ap#tanka#review

Sealed windows of my heart Need a breeze to open them away To conquer the rains and the clouds Need a flight high in the sky The lanes will become roads someday The thoughts will become life someday The night is dark Deep black without the moon light The fortnight is standing far far away And I started the journey with a candle Beyond the clouds Beneath the sea In my heart There's Only victory Give me my wings Give me my flight I am made up for the victory Give me the right time #lotus #review

it happened again, i caught myself staring. the way his trousers hung on his hip, suddenly i wanted to be a sculptor, trying to depict such perfection, getting a thrill each time i studied my muse. i could already feel the clay on my fingertips as i traced my fingers across his torso. he was art. #review