Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5702 · 05/03/2022, 01:44 AM
#review
Few steps from heaven....
Where you can feel the weight of your soul,
Listen to the sound of silence,
See the colours of darkness,
Taste the air you breathee,
Reach the deapth of the ocean,
Touch the limit of the sky..
Few steps from heaven
Where you live being dead...
Open for collab
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5701 · 05/03/2022, 01:43 AM
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5695 · 04/29/2022, 06:23 AM
❤SHOW AND TELL💔. Heart poem.
I don't know how to show myself asked to show.
I belong to you, you belong to me.
I got shattered, felt blue,
When you had a blue day, Carried, lifted a stream of pain, hidden behind a smile when you were sad.
I am fragile but capable of giving you hand in your bad time if sth tugs at your heartstrings.
Here are no words to convey my pain, but always be filled to the brim with shattering, smashing unpleasant words.
Felt to get rid of these but I belong to you and you belong to me.
You don't cry too much, turn heartbreak into love and kindness, and plant them into wounds.
Someday, I would be flying higher with a smile all the way through knowing I was healed and loved by you.
I belong to you and you belong to me.
Aliya Nahid
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5693 · 04/26/2022, 09:28 AM
❤SHOW AND TELL💔. Heart poem.
I don't know how to show myself asked to show.
I belong to you, you belong to me.
I got shattered, felt blue,
When you had a blue day, Carried, lifted a stream of pain, hidden behind a smile when you were sad.
I am fragile but capable of giving you hand in your bad time if sth tugs at your heartstrings.
Here are no words to convey my pain, but always be filled to the brim with shattering, smashing unpleasant words.
Felt to get rid of these but I belong to you and you belong to me.
You don't cry too much, turn heartbreak into love and kindness, and plant them into wounds.
Someday, I would be flying higher with a smile all the way through knowing I was healed and loved by you.
I belong to you and you belong to me.
Aliya Nahid
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5690 · 04/18/2022, 07:14 PM
Could I?
Could I feel the pain you have buried deep in your heart?
Even though I have not felt it,
Even though I can feel it,
Even though I can help you ease it,
Even though I might be stronger than you,
Even though I might just lift your spirits,
Even though you might feel better,
Even though you might walk away,
Even though you might discard me,
Treat me as a rag doll you found on the streets,
Even though I might experience,
A greater pain from you,
Could I just help you for that one moment?
Could I just suck all the pain away?
Could I just hold you close to me?
Could I feel your pain?
#review.
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5687 · 04/12/2022, 01:52 AM
LOVE &CARE
Called him,
Asked him
When getting back,
Darkness covered him,
Overall,
drained him.
My anxiety ended up increasing,
When he cited not to wait for.
Nothing left to speak
When grief got its place.
Blowing my top,
Hitting the roof
Saying
myself Things are good.
In a nutshell,
Fess up, there are
some mess-up.
Without any idea,
I indulge in suspicion,
Silence got loud
Loud got pain.
Called him,
Asked him
When getting back
Got the answer the same,
Explain not to wait for
Green wound held up
I got back home.
Aliya Nahid
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5686 · 04/10/2022, 09:02 PM
Do you see me?
Do you see my body?
Does it interest you?
Do you feel it too?
Do you see me?
Do you see my mouth?
Do you like the words?
Or just the way it sounds?
Do you see me?
Do you see these eyes?
Do you see the pain ?
Do you see what it hides?
Do you see me?
Do you see these scars?
Do you hear the stories they tell?
Do you think I have gone too far?
Do you see me?
Do you see my mind?
Do you think I'm crazy?
But isn't it just what you like?
Do you see me?
Do you see my imperfections?
Would you still love me?
I ask my reflection.
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5682 · 04/08/2022, 08:26 AM
Gaze at, and see the glory of a dark sky filled with countless twinkling stars smiling at you.
The world laughs in your eyes when you get immersed in worried about tomorrow
Smile today, and let happiness go on.
Tomorrow will change in a day,
Smile in the highest of worries.
The moon dwells in your dream to get you higher to jump and fly with your wings.
Change what does not change.
You are the flame of your fire.
And wings of your dream.
Open your door for life.
Sing with morning light.
I am lovable and happy the way I am.
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5677 · 04/02/2022, 04:02 PM
#review
A heartbreaker
Nothing beats a woman who wants to take revenge on a heart breaker. However, it was too late regardless of what I wanted to do. As I lay on my bed thinking back to the day before. I was an idiot. I couldn’t stop him. Not when I had dreamt of it happening numerously. But it turns out, he wanted one thing. Sadly, I let him take it and after we were done, he took out a cigarette, and smoked it while looking anywhere but my sorry figure. He then requested that I forget what had just happened between us.
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5662 · 03/10/2022, 12:57 AM
Hello guys, please can you review the blurb/summary of my book 'Mystical Mutant'
If you liked it you can find it on wattpad @kikibtsstan
BLURB
Several years ago, legend had it that only two mystical creatures existed in the world. The Elevanas and the Glorindians.
They lived together in peace for decades until the day that the Glorindians claimed to be more powerful and superior than the Elevanas. It caused the leaders of the clans to create boundaries between them.
"Who dares fight science with nature?" The Glorindians boasted.
On the other hand, the Elevanas were certain they were stronger. Nature is like a masked devil, so beautiful yet so deadly.
...
A terrible war wiped out the entire species. But there was a survivor, and her name was Fiona.
She must overcome all obstacles to live a normal life forever in the human world.
But the question is,
How long can she hide? How long can she keep this up? How long can she keep pretending to be something she's not? How long is forever?
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5661 · 03/07/2022, 04:30 PM
A free mind
Like the perfect fire/
Like spotless jasmine/
Like a tree without a will/
Like a pure swan /
Like a dove of peace /
Like the wind that blows/
It is like a power of giving birth like water
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5660 · 03/07/2022, 06:58 AM
I lie in bed by night
Wondering if I could have
Just one feel of the universe
Having just one thing working in
My favor.
I lie in bed by night
To feel the war scars across my
Heart, war scars I got from
Being life's strongest soldier
I look on, on how
I dived into the trenches of life
Head first, and I as a soldier of life
I found my way to the war front
I look on, on how
I was ready to shoot any opponent
How I held my gun filled with bullets of love
Trying to love my opponent into giving up
On their pursuit to ruin me
I look on, on how
Every duck and dive I omitted
Placed me deeper in the trenches of war
I gave my opponents more grace
I look on, to see how
I lost myself in the war
How it all started with me losing my mind
Then I turned into the scars I would
Never inflict on my opponents
Now, I lie in bed by night
Counting each scar as a step closer
To my death.
#Review