Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5330 · 06/30/2021, 08:42 PM
#Review #CA#ShortStory
Her heart skipped a beat with knowing that this was the one place where she was pushed. This was a place of constant learning. A place she knew no matter what she could spread her wings. She could continue to grow and transform and be whatever it is that was needed in that moment.
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5327 · 06/29/2021, 03:56 PM
Sleep:
You sleep and dream
I can’t sleep because of dreams
Dreams are that different
Home:
I walk alone, tired
Want to go home badly
Found you, mi casa
Toys:
They share feelings with you
Caress your crying head, hold your smiley face
But those toys can only smile
Isolation:
‘A monster!’, they say
Isolated by everyone, I cry alone
Loneliness, the real demon
Books:
They say talk more, socialize
You will need those for better life
I hold a book and smile
Ice cream:
Icy cold, creamy smooth
Indeed, the opposites attract it seems
That’s what’s love I see.
There are some haiku poems I wrote for my college competition.
Do tell me if anything needs to be improved~
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5312 · 06/19/2021, 05:47 AM
#review I think you really fall in a love. It's great letter expressed your feelings and a good start. You explored the love and it's feelings thoroughly. It looks like personal experience. Great
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5310 · 06/18/2021, 01:41 PM
It wasn't that bright anymore,
The purplish pink lines of cloud shimmering.
Earth ready to turn off into the darkest mode.
Sign made, for the lush curtain of life to fall down.
Done with the pain it brings today, but wasn't sure for tomorrow.
Can I survive again
There's no single question mark.
Because I'm not asking when I know the answer.
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5308 · 06/18/2021, 06:33 AM
I lost
I lost in stars
I lost in wonders of life
I lost in my own vision
I lost in the way i know
I lost in brightness of day
I feel no pain, no sorrow, no bad, no worries, no gilt, no good, no bad, no joy, no happiness, nothing
But it still me.
I'm always this just pretending it's not me.
I find
I find this after all good
I know this from staring
And finally i'm aware. Still
I'm lost
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5307 · 06/17/2021, 05:26 PM
Unspecable acts of emotion, mysteriously hid beneath the deepened edges of the hardened heart
With great desires to be acknowledged, to be felt , to be longing for the touch of warmth
Sleeved and covered enough , dying in the words never spelled beyond the need,
Oh indeed!
Two in silence ranging to bawl, into floods of sensation never ever reached
Deficient of the courage
Wounded in mysterious clutches of the timid brain and the nerval curves
Wondering in the woosy land of unsaid words and unexpressed feelings
How little could it be taking,
and
How so in plenty could it be giving
But in greatly dense thoughts,
In suspicious condition of the human heart,
There lay a reason,
An
Unreachable start, of an anew feeling, blossoming disgustedly but is be fitted inside,
Yearning to come out and emblaze all around
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5305 · 06/17/2021, 03:57 AM
You never know with whom you red string of fate is connected to.
They may be right in front of you for your whole life, but you fail to recognize them, until the right moment.
It just takes a moment to fall in love, but a lifetime to maintain it.
"I told you, you can't escape me baby. Your fate has been entangled with me since that day."
Kim Yoona was shocked by the words uttered by Lee Jihun. He sounded so controlling and cold. He wasn't like this before. But after that day, everything changed between them.
This is another novel of mine. DM me if you're interested in reading it~
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5304 · 06/16/2021, 02:30 PM
Drugs maybe able to cure our bodies, but what about the soul?
One can recover from the deadliest disease, if he's a happy soul, but the damaged soul crumbles inside.
There's only one cure for the broken souls, LOVE.
"What's better than a warm bath---" Chen Xixi stopped dead in her tracks when she noticed a man lying on her bed, with his head on his palm.
"Welcome back baby~" Jiang Sheng purred in a deep voice.
"The fu*k you doing here?" Chen Xixi was so angry that she could faint.
"Chill darling. I'm here to surprise you. Don't you like it?"
"Yeah I loved it. Let me return the favor."
Xixi pounced at Jiang Sheng and locked him in a choke hold.
"How many times I have told you to get lost?" Xixi gritted her teeth while suffocating the man below her.
"Let go you stupid girl. You'll leave marks on my beautiful neck"
Chen Xixi wasn't able to hold him for a long time though.
"Crazy woman! Are you that jealous of my appearance?." Sheng was checking in the mirror if his neck had any marks.
"Hah! Stop spouting nonsense and get your dumbass out of my room. You contaminated my bed with your germs. Ewww"
"I'm trying to do my job ok? I was instructed to surprise my 'fan' who stays in this hostel room. It was by someone whom I can't refuse. Heavens must hate me that you're my fan."
"Your fan? You've finally lost it. I'll gladly kiss a pig then to see your face one more time. Who told you I'm your fan?"
"Your family."
'What the actual heck!'
You're welcome to join this hate-love relationship journey of Chen Xixi and Jiang Sheng.
Will they find together a cure called LOVE?
I improved my synopsis a bit so please review it.
DM me for the link~~
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5297 · 06/15/2021, 03:54 PM
Loved you more than dearly
Yet you treated mah love cavalierly,
I made you my world
And you made me travel through the netherworld
Everything that you made me feel, I guess,
The undying love you professed
Must say your love had me impressed
Whereas the truth was you couldn't care less.
Today your ignorance hit me like a truck,
To fall for your lies guess I really was a schmuck.
But now that your true self has come to light,
I think I'll take leave from your life outright;
Leaving you at your plight,
I'll now soar like a kite.
© Adi
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5295 · 06/15/2021, 05:31 AM
Sweet were our snaps,
Etched forever in my mind like the city maps.
Laying down in the sun,
Together the walks we had were fun.
Separate we always made a mess,
Together everyone can guess.
Our tale were the envies of the fairies,
But now all left are the memories;
These are now buried treasure,
Which are priceless beyond measure
©Adi
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5293 · 06/14/2021, 01:20 PM
Oops. You have to add #review in order to get your posts reviewed.
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5291 · 06/12/2021, 06:23 AM
Our talk in life
In the morning, we tend to have a talk
Little do we talk about, every talk
Often, not often, because of time to talk
Vaporising, always we are, 'cause of life
Ending the circle, worrying about our talk
Yes, to meet is to wait for the chance of life
Onto such a connection, patience in life
Uncertainty, how we got to know in life?
#review