Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5243 · 05/30/2021, 06:06 AM
Radiance
I plucked a star out of the
sky
And put it in my head
Enlightened, literally, in
the eyes
Although I burned and
bled;
It fizzled loudly in my
ears
the shine was a blinding
glow
and though I broke to a
thousand pieces
I'd never felt so whole.
I plucked a star out of the
sky
And replaced my mind
and brain,
My skull had burst with
wishing dust
Although it morphed with
pain.
The star was a ball of
blazing white
that ignited and pulled me
apart
And it exploded me into
million pieces
but I felt like a radiant
art.
#review#poem#jt
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5238 · 05/29/2021, 02:57 PM
Beautifully broken
She left when you needed her,
But you stood her up alone before when she needed you.
You say karma is a b*tch,
Maybe this is your karma hitting you.
Love is a beautiful word,
Equally the worst feeling.
Those who want never find it,
Those who get it never value it.
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder,
love is beautiful, everyone told her.
She loved me, and me alone,
Now, we are stranded alone.
Playing with her feelings,
I broke her heart into pieces,
Now we stay apart,
Wounds can be healed but not the broken heart. ©Asura
#review#feedback#poem
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4941 · 02/18/2021, 07:15 PM
Page through that book
To get to the nooks
That inspires that hooks
Book that ticket
To fly to the skies
In that little skit
Nurture the child
That comes as a joke
In a sea of scary faces
Reminisce not the past
Just to wallow in the plug
That doesn't help your soul
Aid your growth
With nothing but seeds
To get your harvest
Dance not in pressure
For you are not them
You are you.
© Favody
#review#poem#write
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5276 · 06/05/2021, 02:33 PM
Mind had no more muse
The poet in me, died and rot
And my haiku cried.
#review#haiku#nandini
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5514 · 11/18/2021, 06:11 PM
After the mistake you can know
What you had and what you have now.
#Akash#Quote#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5513 · 11/18/2021, 05:48 PM
Mistakes make a man perfect,
but those mistakes take away a lot of.
#Akash#Quote#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5502 · 11/14/2021, 06:26 PM
You don't need to put "PIN DROP SILENCE" board outside or inside the lecture room, your voice and words should have that much power that people keep "PIN DROP SILENCE".
#Akash#quote#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5467 · 10/09/2021, 02:33 PM
People call me selfish :
I watched my love cheating me in front of my eyes holding hands together while I just wished for their happiness. Yes this is how selfish I am 🙂
#quote#review#shubham©
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5466 · 10/09/2021, 02:23 PM
Sometimes it's better to choose friendship over love
Because in the end it's good to have Friend by your side instead loosing them both
#review#shubham©#quote
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5713 · 05/06/2022, 01:01 PM
#review#iam#haiku
Is this the demise of the unique journey??
If yes!!!
Then what else is there in our stores?? Sounds meaningless!!!
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5271 · 06/04/2021, 12:03 PM
JUST ANOTHER LIE...
Ever since I started walking he was always next to me. I have known him forever. I loved him forever. He was my best friend before even knowing what friendship was.
Whenever he held me tight I never wanted to let him go.
When others made me cry, he was the only person who made me smile.
There were so many times I wanted to tell him how I felt. I never knew what to say, just like today.
Standing in here embellished my face with a smile. All eyes on us made me feel overwhelmed.
Holding up the glass and all I could think of. What should I say?
Should I say how much I love him?
Should I say I will always love him and he is the love of my life?
Should I say how I really feel?
Or just another lie.
All these years I waited to see love in his eyes. And there it is, for a fraction of second I saw that love in his eyes gazed around just to see the love of his life.
Finally he looked at me raising his glass.
The time has come.
Now what do I say?
That I loved him the most?
That earth stops spinning when he looks at me every time.
Or just another lie.
Well among all the thought that was running in my head all my mouth could comprehend was just another lie.
A congratulatory toss on his wedding day.
#review#shortstory#Hope...
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5309 · 06/18/2021, 11:16 AM
Haiku
Sunshine after rain,
Droplets on the spider web
Glisten on and off.
#review#haiku#Florence