Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5018 · 03/24/2021, 12:05 PM
#review#poetry#Angela
COURAGE
swimming in the
ocean of fear
and doubt
Believing the
Oasis moment of
negative thoughts
Drawn by it's
Discouraging words
Saying "you can't"
Weighed him down
Withheld the light
Replaces it with darkness
Signifying Nothing
Tried to be firm
But it all looks like a game
Falling, the more he faught to get up
"You can't!!" It echoed
"I can" he managed to say
The pain of falling thousand
times Was unbearable.
With believe and
positive thoughts
Anger filled as his white
charming eyes turned red
Facing doubt and fear
Defeating it with courage
Saying "I did it!!"
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4988 · 03/10/2021, 02:48 PM
#poetry#Angela#review
Why love?
Swimming in the pool of pain
Drown by lustful desire
Fed with
Lies and fake promises
Singing stupid excuses
Strips me naked before him
Satisfies himself with no bill
Do the same to a girly in my absent
Why love?
Pecks me in pretence
Trying to make it known he really cares
his arms round my waist
Kissing and dangling with my hair
Convincing my thoughts with romantic touches.
Why love?
When all that comes after is pain.
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4985 · 03/08/2021, 07:48 AM
She maneuvers arduous all day,
She cooks and vigilance for the family,
She nurtures her juveniles,
She fulfills everyone foremost,
Then she dines,
She is a selfless mama,
She is also a good daughter,
She is eternal with her companion in kith and kin of vitality,
She invariably endures everything,
She renunciations everything for the clan,
It is said "God cant take vigilance of all humans, he cultivated mothers"
Oh lord, what an amazing souvenir,
Oh lord, bless our mothers with promising essence,
Oh lord, we thank you for the bounty
Perpetually virtue your "mother"
Not everyone is honored to have "Mom"
She fetches me from all crises,
She is a good mama and true pal,
She compels me "smile" when im sad,
"Mom" cant be depicted in words!
#poetry#review#ae
Happy women's day
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4959 · 02/25/2021, 09:56 PM
Shattered yearns
Erratic yore
It's very susceptible to shirk past
It's very arduous to stride ahead
Easy is to aspire with orifices
It's difficult to overlook downfalls in vitality
The world of infatuation is glamorous
Encountering real-world is too tough
Falsifying a smile is merciful,
Exhibiting grief behind a smile is overwhelming
Easy to make many fictitious pals,
It's hard to excavate even a true one
Striving at stars is easy,
Fulfilling it is so hard
My consciousness implores me "who I am"
I'm void with no alibis,
Will I able to discover "who I am",
" Am I happy?"
"What's my purpose?"
My voidness is inflicting misery,
Dwelling a vitality of fakeness,
Feared of encountering a true one,
Attempting to let go of yore,
Struggling to find clues,
Aiming to see ambitions with eyes,
Embarking to find true prosperity
One day I will accomplish...
-Aira
#review#poetry#ae
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5679 · 04/05/2022, 10:22 PM
Tree of Spirits
There is a world far beyond our own,
Where there is a tree and not a soul.
Planted on the dark side of the horizon
It harbors the spirits lost in tragedies
Struggling to find a place in Heaven.
When the moon sneaks above the sky
Looking like a black orb without radiance,
Looms out of the dark clouds with a sneer,
Then the tree glows in vibrant colors
With smoky hues of red, green and blue
Forming a grim nimbus around it.
This grotesque spectacle is conjured
By the occult of witches and warlocks
For the souls try to take forms of the past
In a hellish way to liberate themselves
From the leash of branches entwined
Within the hideous trunk from which
Beautiful faces and rotten skulls and
Mortified eyes peer into the darkness
In a despairing search for a glimpse
Of something that breathes.
(c) Amit Herlekar
#freeverse#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5672 · 03/20/2022, 09:25 PM
#review#salonikulkarni
[Untitled]
And in his soft eyes
I saw the starry sparkling night.
Twinkling with a warm love
Wrapping me in his glow.
With his smile
He spoke a thousand words unsaid
His blond hair and blue eyes
Make me weaker in the knees
I want to be right beside him
Through everything, together
I can say I love him
I'll say it a million times
And it still won't capture
What my heart feels.
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5621 · 01/28/2022, 10:02 AM
Payback
Lost and trapped in a hole six feet deep, the king screamed for help as no one could hear him. Few minutes later, an anaconda struggling to make her way to the whole where the king was.
King Ahmatep Okole was the greatest king there is. His voice was like the roar of a lion. Lives will be taken at the snap of his fingers. So great he was, yet a dictator. His people were no longer in support of him for the all wanted to overthrow him for his ruthlessness was becoming too much.
He was so great, even demons trembled at his feet.
Marysel, a beautiful maiden came to serve his highness. For she was so beautiful that his majesty couldn't resist. His highness immediately after seeing her ordered for a grand ceremony to make her his wife.
The ceremony went well until later that night, marysel being an assassin and witch, made some incantations and with the speed of light, she together with the king disappeared and appeared in a six feet deep hole. Immediately she turned to an anaconda and later took away the king's life by cutting off his head. For darkness was upon the land. But in a period of 10 minutes, light touched every part of the kingdom. For the king is dead.
When this news got to the villagers, there was great celebration in the land for the king was no more.
#review#Clarence
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5603 · 01/13/2022, 03:19 AM
Payback
Lost and trapped in a hole six feet deep, the king screamed for help as no one could hear him. Few minutes later, an anaconda struggling to make her way to the whole where the king was.
King Ahmatep Okole was the greatest king there is. His voice was like the roar of a lion. Lives will be taken at the snap of his fingers. So great he was, yet a dictator. His people were no longer in support of him for the all wanted to overthrow him for his ruthlessness was becoming too much.
He was so great, even demons trembled at his feet.
Marysel, a beautiful maiden came to serve his highness. For she was so beautiful that his majesty couldn't resist. His highness immediately after seeing her ordered for a grand ceremony to make her his wife.
The ceremony went well until later that night, marysel being an assassin and witch, made some incantations and with the speed of light, she together with the king disappeared and appeared in a six feet deep hole. Immediately she turned to an anaconda and later took away the king's life by cutting off his head. For darkness was upon the land. But in a period of 10 minutes, light touched every part of the kingdom. For the king is dead.
When this news got to the villagers, there was great celebration in the land for the king was no more.
#review#Clarence
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5411 · 09/22/2021, 12:40 PM
was held accused by myself, god oh god! Drowning in old sin's, bumfuzzle me tryin' figure out. Hell ya, I lied you again myself.
#l#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5360 · 08/13/2021, 01:59 PM
Smile is the only curve that sets things in straight line.
Harsh from Gujarat pens down a thought on smile...!!
Do you know what's satisfying?
When you make someone smile while they were crying.
That smile which holds fire to shine from within, But helplessness just dims their light within.
The smile that wants to burst out laughing,
But their situation insists them to shed another drop of tear.
We can just take a small initiative.
Don't show hatred towards anyone in their low
You never know, when that low might turn everything around.
If possible bring a smile on someone's face
The satisfaction you'll gain can't be expressed.
God's above seeing this, will smile too
And in your life you'll surely ace.
~Harsh
#review#smile
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5359 · 08/13/2021, 01:40 PM
Smile is the only curve that sets things in straight line.
Harsh from Gujarat pens down a thought on smile...!!
Do you know what's satisfying?
When you make someone smile while they were crying.
That smile which holds fire to shine from within, But helplessness just dims their light within.
The smile that wants to burst out laughing,
But their situation insists them to shed another drop of tear.
We can just take a small initiative.
Don't show hatred towards anyone in their low
You never know, when that low might turn everything around.
If possible bring a smile on someone's face
The satisfaction you'll gain can't be expressed.
God's above seeing this, will smile too
And in your life you'll surely ace.
~Harsh
#review#smile
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5334 · 07/01/2021, 04:01 AM
#review#comment@akshali18
Wish Every day I see a new sunrise. My life, my vision, my delighters, my happiness, my experience is with me now and I am on no account going to misplace it. I have faced many teething troubles, many snake oils people but luckily, I am out of all the dilemmas in my life and that’s impressive. Now the sparkling day has come when I have become advanced to a greater extent, a pace more for advancing my future. I will show consideration for one and all, share cheerfulness with all and sundry and lend a hand to whole world. But without divinity it is impossible, and I am 101% sure you are with me god 😊. My life is mine each and every instant what I have suffered is adjusted by me to get out of that situation...
- the silent soul