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Walking hand in hand with you, In the moonlight, Can barely see each other's faces in that glint. Wow ! such a romantic thing, Never expected a proposal from you, As it should be me to initiate.! Anyway.., I'm literally controlling my excitement and about to answer, And closed my eyes to whisper my reply, .... a big ( thunder )sound.... Opened my eyes to see who disturbed the moment, It is then I realised, It's just a dream. A dream that made me curious about who that person is..? The person whom I dreamt about..! #review#L

Cadaverous Pulse He crossed his arms atop his chest, Shut his eyes and held his breath; The rusty nails slam through wood As all the mourners watched and stood. His lungs begged him to scream and writhe, But when the coffin drops he smiles And lets himself fall into slumber- How refreshing to be blind. The isolation brings him comfort And he's friends with all the ghosts There's no need to lie or fight or fret, No need to ever boast. Peace on Earth has never been But underground there is no sin So here he'll lie for all his life, Without the pain and all the strife.. #review#jt

Tree of Spirits There is a world far beyond our own, Where there is a tree and not a soul. Planted on the dark side of the horizon It harbors the spirits lost in tragedies Struggling to find a place in Heaven. When the moon sneaks above the sky Looking like a black orb without radiance, Looms out of the dark clouds with a sneer, Then the tree glows in vibrant colors With smoky hues of red, green and blue Forming a grim nimbus around it. This grotesque spectacle is conjured By the occult of witches and warlocks For the souls try to take forms of the past In a hellish way to liberate themselves From the leash of branches entwined Within the hideous trunk from which Beautiful faces and rotten skulls and Mortified eyes peer into the darkness In a despairing search for a glimpse Of something that breathes. (c) Amit Herlekar #freeverse#review

That night That night will always be special. The first time we were all alone with each other. How many times i had imagined us like this. With anticipation of something beautiful to happen, there was nervousness in me. Thank God that it was the breeze which eased up the tension in the air. I was thinking of ways to talk with you, when you held my hand by my wrist. Yes I will admit that my heart skipped a beat but I was happy that it happened finally. You made me face you. I was so nervous as to whether to kiss you or not. My breath was getting heavy. I could hear the silence which has fallen over the night. All I could hear was the beating of my own heart which was waiting to be yours tonight. We both were sitting with our legs folded. I could feel your eyes on me. And that was the thing which was making it hard for me to look at you. You started caressing my hand. I was wearing that spaghetti top which I knew would make you not to able to resist me. My hair was open as usual. And I guess moonlight was falling just at the right angle on my face. I heard you say, "You look beautiful tonight." I tried to hide my smile but i rather not. I smiled and looked at you. Your eyes were beaming just like mine. I wanted to kiss you so bad but still I was controlling myself not to show you how much I want you. You were running your fingers over the length of my arm. Up and down. You could see it in the way my body was reacting to your touch. That soft touch was making me feel like to melt just right there. The breeze flowing was touching me too. I could see you leaning in and there you kissed my right cheek. I smiled and let you know that i am blushing. You entwined your fingers with mine and pulled me close. My eyes met yours. For the first time, we were this close. My cheeks were flushing red. You caressed my left cheek with your fingertip. I laughed. You know I laugh when I am nervous. I wanted to escape and not at the same time. I finally leaned into you, cupped your face and put my lips on you. What we felt at that moment I can't write because we have not experienced it. But I look forward to that night when we will share our first kiss. When that one kiss will lead to a 1000 more. When we will finally erupt like two dormant volcanoes. Our salivas mixing like hot lava. Our bodies finally feeling each other's touch. Only never to forget it. I miss you. #review#Musings

THAT NIGHT That night will always be special. The first time we were all alone with each other. How many times i had imagined us like this. With anticipation of something beautiful to happen, there was nervousness in me. Thank God that it was the breeze which eased up the tension in the air. I was thinking of ways to talk with you, when you held my hand by my wrist. Yes I will admit that my heart skipped a beat but I was happy that it happened finally. You made me face you. I was so nervous as to whether to kiss you or not. My breath was getting heavy. I could hear the silence which has fallen over the night. All I could hear was the beating of my own heart which was waiting to be yours tonight. We both were sitting with our legs folded. I could feel your eyes on me. And that was the thing which was making it hard for me to look at you. You started caressing my hand. I was wearing that spaghetti top which I knew would make you not to able to resist me. My hair was open as usual. And I guess moonlight was falling just at the right angle on my face. I heard you say, "You look beautiful tonight." I tried to hide my smile but i rather not. I smiled and looked at you. Your eyes were beaming just like mine. I wanted to kiss you so bad but still I was controlling myself not to show you how much I want you. You were running your fingers over the length of my arm. Up and down. You could see it in the way my body was reacting to your touch. That soft touch was making me feel like to melt just right there. The breeze flowing was touching me too. I could see you leaning in and there you kissed my right cheek. I smiled and let you know that i am blushing. You entwined your fingers with mine and pulled me close. My eyes met yours. For the first time, we were this close. My cheeks were flushing red. You caressed my left cheek with your fingertip. I laughed. You know I laugh when I am nervous. I wanted to escape and not at the same time. I finally leaned into you, cupped your face and put my lips on you. What we felt at that moment I can't write because we have not experienced it. But I look forward to that night when we will share our first kiss. When that one kiss will lead to a 1000 more. When we will finally erupt like two dormant volcanoes. Our salivas mixing like hot lava. Our bodies finally feeling each other's touch. Only never to forget it. I miss you. #review#Musings

Under the chinaar are my stories and under the dark sky are all my secrets there are hands over my mouth to supress my voice everyone pretends deaf so that the truth remains unheard and the fear of loosing someone is making me believe that this is not a cage but my whole world #review#hadiya

If you touch water, it wets you If you touch love, it burns you If you touch friendship, it gets you If you touch lust, it turns you #review #The_Lost_Poet

Dear Love, I was passing thru a tunnel, deep, long, dense and drk tunnel full of the pain and agony, freaking and frustrating. It seems there was no end to this tunnel. In despair, i approached you, took your name, imagined your smile! And to my surprise, now the tunnel has ended. A bright beam of the light showing me a path ahead. Love, smiles, happiness all what I wished ahead. It feels like you filled my path with the sun light. Yes jaan, indeed you are the sunshine for me. And Love you love, for being there as bright light for me. Love you love, for bringing lots of happiness for me. Love you love, for gifting me the infinite togetherness. Love you 💕💕💕 #letter #review

*FRACTION OF SECONDS* Woke up. I knew I was late. Coz that was my routine. And coz of a simple logic, why be excited to wake up early and go to a place you hate and do something that you hate! I sighed when my mouth tasted coffee before colgate...Ahh! how I love normal days, It was a normal day. At least that's what I thought. Papa was there looking up from the newspaper at me with a sense of pity. I sort of ignored that and walked out through the front door, but the next sight, a brand new beautiful ladybird and an even more beautiful rider, with short black hair waving in the wind, in a skirt that knew well not to cover her beautiful legs... Well I couldn't ignore that! Just a fraction of seconds and I had already captured her. Made her mine. Is this what they call... Oops!! She looked at me. Damn it! She caught me staring at her! I looked away whistling. I looked again, did I see a smile? I heard Mom shouting my name out aloud. I knew I had to rush. As I was rushing inside I heard a loud thud. I turned back and saw the beautiful ladybird lying on the road. It was only a fraction of second, yet my mind talked to me in infinite speed...Somethings...what did he say I don't remember anymore. I remember rushing back to the house. One year I didn't talk to our new neighbour who was an year older than me.Days went by. Mom had started packing things up one evening I came back from school. Papa received his transfer letter. Now whenever I see a cycle I think. What would've happened? Why hadn't I stopped my mind talking to me? Why hadn't I I rushed 'out'side than 'in'side? All in a fraction of second! #JOHN PAUL BENOY #Review

Drizzles It’s drizzling Over the half-furrowed field A frog jumps, happy and thrilled. It’s drizzling On the leaves of dark green colour An yellow bee feasts on a flower. It’s drizzling Over the lone banyan tree A squirrel in the nest sits carefree. It’s drizzling on the brick-red rooftops Two girls sing and dance in blue tops. #poem#review#Florence

MyselfMyself I stood there like a lifeless lighthouse Ashore the vast and furious ocean Beckoned by the turquoise potion Which I chose to not drink and drowse I looked back to find myself Once a beacon of hope and mirth To the lost wanderers of the earth Now I feel dragged down by a dark elf I stood there amid the starless sky With no company but bitter thoughts Where I kept untangling the knots Of my unburied past with a deep sigh I look forward to find myself A rekindled flame, never to waver Never to die out, burning forever An illuminated soul and rejuvenated self. #poem#review#Florence