Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5782 · 05/29/2022, 05:30 PM
Title : "Problem Child or Golden Child"
Shimmering alone from heaven,
Was wandering a divine soul,
Enclosed within a living corpse,
Struggling alone for liberty.
Is it a Problem Child or a Golden Child?
Shivering under eternal moonlight,
Protesting against the worldly foes.
Resisting extreme ailments for survival,
"Is there a place to reside?",
Said the Spiritual Soul of the Problem Child.
Residing in an awful body,
Which looks so messy has a Golden Soul.
In this materialistic world of possessions,
Where appearance matters the most,
Has still someone to care for?
Then, suddenly spiritual aura emerges,
Another soul dropped by & surges,
Who also have a similar fate,
Dressed up all the wounds in the divine soul,
It was none other than the soulmate.
Returning after ages to heaven,
The happiest soul was glinting Golden.
The wandering soul immersed in fantasies,
Who was very soon going to depart,
At last found a place in God's heart. 💫✨
#review#Cookie#soulful_poetry
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5374 · 08/25/2021, 07:00 AM
Tanka : 57577
I'm alone at my place
Perhaps, someone will come here
A beautiful lady, and
Will take my hand in her hand
Maybe will say I'm with you.
#ap#review#tanka
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5368 · 08/18/2021, 04:57 AM
Tanka : 57577
If I do any crime!
If I hurt you more before:
Will you forgive me?
Like you forgave me before;
I like you because of these.
#ap#tanka#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5349 · 08/07/2021, 09:29 AM
I sniffed our wilted pink roses
When thy old letters, I dupp'd
Haue not rights to touch thou
To hug, To kiss thou forehead
#Ap#quatrain#review
Words : Old/Middle into Morden English
Thy - your
dupp'd -opened
Haue/Hast not - have not
Thou - you (subject)
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5313 · 06/19/2021, 09:47 AM
• Quatrain •
The world can't see inside's pain
And, tears are hidden in the rain
Even if the world calls me stupid
But, Her voice affects like music
#ap#quatrain#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5747 · 05/23/2022, 12:57 PM
Hope meaning in my word's "Light"
We just walking under the tunnel because we know we can find a light end of this tunnel. Life is equal to tunnel so don't stop. Keep walking.
#review#RC#hope
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5459 · 10/07/2021, 12:20 PM
#review#Linville
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Full of self driven energy
Eyes red as berries
Not forgetting to picturesque
In middle of nightmare you were
Safe and sound still breathing
But at least for once,in the morning
Give thanks to Almighty
Everyday you wake up
Thinking of filling stomach
Faithfulness,self control,hard work
Sweat will set the stage,foreseeing
The possibilities of setting food
On the table for your kids
But at least for once,during afternoon
Give thanks to Almighty.
Everyday you wake up
It's not a priffling duty
To work tirelessly all day
For coins to fill the pocket
And supper be in provision
Thinking of tomorrows troubles
Before laying head on pillowcase
But at least for once,at night
Give thanks to Almighty.
#give thanks to Almighty for gift of life given
#Linville
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4981 · 03/05/2021, 07:56 AM
"The Goose Girl"
'Acne, Acne and Blemishes',
They call her names all the time,
But when she looks deep within her,
She just can't understand why,
She looks into the mirror,
And wants different color hair,
Then frowns at her reflection,
Wishing no marks were ever there,
She throws the mirror down,
Can't look into it anymore,
Then stares at a piece of glass,
Sitting on the cold bathroom floor
I hope they'll beg for forgiveness,
For the glass left on her floor,
And for thinking that a woman's beauty,
Is defined by so much more
I hope she finds someone,
Who'd tell her what scars really meant,
And would kiss every scar off her body,
Followed by a series a compliments!
~IWRITESOMETIMES :)
#review
#iwritesometimes
#acnelina
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5451 · 10/06/2021, 09:59 AM
I'm looking for a man who says,
"Giving a relationship time doesn't break it."
#AkashAP#review#satire
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5444 · 10/01/2021, 03:29 AM
Those who say: "I'm not in love", then
Whose face comes with closed eyes?
"Love makes its presence felt even in its absence."
#AkashAP#review#words
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5261 · 06/03/2021, 12:25 PM
#Morning#review#CA
Startled by the midnight hour
A veil lifted
No longer a barrier
Angels and demons at my side
Each gifting me
One shows me compassion
The other shows me strength
Accepting this duality
Becoming whole
I reach my hand within the dark
I open my heart to the light
Beauty and danger intertwined
Both are needed and both are divine
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5104 · 04/15/2021, 07:38 AM
How do I tell you ?
The song of your love,
Plays loud in my mind,
The reminiscence of your voice,
Elates everytime I breathe
Kaise bataye
Kyun tujko chahe
Yaara bata na paye.
Spoke a million times,
Everything in my dreams.
Yet silent I remained,
Everytime when you speak.
You, a mere dream,
May be of someone else,
Yet my mystic mind,
Never seems to sway away,
My heart smiles,
My mind cries,
A Euphoria of mess,
Is what it plays,
Weaving thoughts of you,
Yet I don't know,
Why we ever met ?
A distance of thousand miles,
Unknown affection,
Dearly dreams,
And why all of these
Includes you ?
Here you are,
Near to me,
My hope,
The feelings I get,
Nunchi you have,
Yet you are not mine.
Soche ye,
Tum kyu aaye,
Meri iss Zindagi mai kyun,
Dooriyan itni hai,
Ki naazdikiyon,
Se dar ab kyun,
Phir bhi har waqt
Mere khayalon mai,
Sirf tum kyun ?
Kaise bataye kyun tujko chahe,
Yaara bata na paye,
Batein dilon ki, hai abhi jo baki,
Kyun tum samaj nahi paye,
Tu jaane na.....
Tu jaane na...
You may never know..
#recreatedsong
#review
#nandini