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I hide my heart in an olden vase In a room with no window Through belvedere I bow to the dark alley And cry on behalf of all despaired: "Alas I'm wasted" However my wanderer heart remember That we - me&you- honored love Remember my wanderer heart! Remember! That we -me&you- honored man Whether he's God's masterpiece or isn't #review

A boy I don’t like told me to write from the heart I didn’t know what that meant because I never knew I had one I never knew I had a heart ‘Til you said you kissed a boy I haven’t met Then I knew I had a heart Because I thought it might stop And when I thought my heart might stop beating I realised it had always been there But it didn’t know how to feel Until I thought about losing you I knew we wouldn’t last forever I was waiting for this day But I hope we can fix things And if we can’t I will always thank you For showing me I have a heart #review

"I am absolutely tired. This world is cruel beyond compare. I have been searching for the cure to my ills and pains since I was conferred to this world. I am disappointed for my all searches ended in smoke", protested I. Murshid paused and answered,"Which world have you been searching? You have surely barked up the wrong tree. There is a world inside you where the relief to your sufferings exists". The answer ripped my argument apart. #review

#review the bearing braced walls shuddered, shattered, shredded not completely though there are yet seeds to be sowed in the heavenly abode drop by drop, soon in rivers, chaotic blood flowed from the structure's doors that now shut open rivers in abandoned arbitrary flow drop by drop, it stopped too Bloooooooddddd not the sparkling red glitters but just the no r m a l endometrium maybe crimson paint spilled on the canvas but more b e a u t i f u l n beyond this structure, not only has walls but there's this boss lady who makes all the calls from the entry to exists carrying on the proceedings she comes once a month to collect what is solely hers upon not getting what she deserves she ends up creating a bloody mess & chaos she is no harm, she means no harm she is just here to calm you through the storms she wants you to believe her, promising that flowers will too bloom, pls hold on till spring I have tried to metaphor "menstruation" here, stating the uterus as a kind of structure where there is lady (ovum) who takes all the decisions. But I am really not sure if I succeeded. Also I wanted to add a paragraph about how this structure will be a (king)dom or a fort(ress). I also wanted to convey more how it is beautiful n symbolic to life & not focus on society's prohibitions & perspectives Please review this for me, and lemme know if it makes sense. Thank You :) #review

#review the bearing braced walls shuddered, shattered, shredded not completely though there are yet seeds to be sowed in the heavenly abode drop by drop, soon in rivers, chaotic blood flowed from the structure's doors that now shut open rivers in abandoned arbitrary flow drop by drop, it stopped too Bloooooooddddd not the sparkling red glitters but just the no r m a l endometrium maybe crimson paint spilled on the canvas but more b e a u t i f u l n beyond this structure, not only has walls but there's this boss lady who makes all the calls from the entry to exists carrying on the proceedings she comes once a month to collect what is solely hers upon not getting what she deserves she ends up creating a bloody mess & chaos she is no harm, she means no harm she is just here to calm you through the storms she wants you to believe her, promising that flowers will too bloom, pls hold on till spring I have tried to metaphor "menstruation" here. But I am really not sure if I succeeded. Also I wanted to add a paragraph about how this structure will be a (king)dom or a fort(ress). Please review this for me, and lemme know if it makes sense. Thank You :) #review

Chaos. We all are lost in chaos. We know that, but we are frightened at finding ourselves face to face with this horrible reality. Furthermore, we often try to cover it over with a curtain of fantasy. There are people or circumstances we point finger at, and we be the best storyteller in the scenario. Reason could be anything our fear, our will, ability to accept reality, Lack of clarity and many more. We are not even going to look at this and accept it. We often hide behind the cloud of being in certain ideas which are not true, always uses them as trenches for the defense of our existence. Not only that, but we will be far away from reality and light years away from our self. It is not always about You vs them!! It is not even about you vs situation.!! At the end it is about your ability to facing the truth. Will you be able to adapt or not?? Will you be able to overcome or not?? About your mind works for you or you work for your mind.!! It is always about YOU vs YOU. One of the kindest thing you can do for ourselves is that we need to accept that we are lost. And if we have accepted that,we will begin to find ourselves. By finding ourselves we will find the center of strength within, and we will be different person all together. This is what our society needs rather than ideas and inventions. Always go a little further into the water than you feel you are capable of being in. Go a little out of your depth. And when you do not feel your feet are quite touching the bottom, you are just about in the right place to do something exciting. #review

#review you hve nicely penned down. Nice collection of words with the clarity. I enjoyed a lot reading this

it happened again, i caught myself staring. the way his trousers hung on his hip, suddenly i wanted to be a sculptor, trying to depict such perfection, getting a thrill each time i studied my muse. i could already feel the clay on my fingertips as i traced my fingers across his torso. he was art. #review

NEVER UNSCATHED I looked through the darkest night seeking my lover to behold; She was nowhere to be found; She has become a passing shadow in the dark; My heart got drenched by the solitude of being with myself; The ecstatic moments we used to share has become a tossed wave in the sea; My soul got drowned in perpetual pains, hell undesirable; But I was determined to heal and resurrect all of my broken pieces; Many stood afar watching the story of my life unfold; Some dished out mockeries and made a tease out of my downfalls; I was always thrown into the dustbin but I always saw myself cleaner than their evil intentions; You may suffer for a while but it's only for a time; Hold on and push harder; Yes, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel and I went through unscathed, never being a victim of pains and aches; Now I know everything works together for good!! #review

Took you for granted forgot you were a part of me and now when you are gone couldn’t find a purpose to live I find myself lost in all the moments with you And all the time we spent I am here waiting for you Cursing myself for letting go of you I cry every day till the lights are out In all the moments we were together Lost a part of me Never felt so lonely It’s killing from inside Never been in so much regret How could I be such an idiot to let you go Wishing you are here with me one more time And I won’t let you go Wouldn’t be so careless Won’t be so rude Would be good Would listen to you Will look into your eyes And hold you in my arms And will never let you go Every breath that I take without you feels like a curse I am nothing without you #review

COSMIC INTIMACY Your fingers Caresses my soul when I embraced your love web. Your vibe is as soothing as the evening breeze and within my soul I know we have been made for each other. Even though you're faraway but our telepathic communication is no lie. You make it feel real like two Lovers talking over the phone. I can feel your love through your telepathic voice and it brings me eternal HEALING as I equally offer you eternal comfort and security. I am open to love you unending. Let's pour ourselves in the cup of trust, respect, truth and love, let's drink each other in the ocean of love and make it wet overnight. Feel the cosmic lights pervading your soul as we make love in the universe. Be open and raw. Feel the passion and ecstasy in your deepest core. You're fully drowned into eternal bliss. May the lion and lioness in both of us roar. You're my goddess and I am YOUR god, both remains an eternal universe and this is the letter between two living stardust. #review

#review@akshali Wish Every day I see a new sunrise. My life, my vision, my delighters, my happiness, my experience is with me now and I am on no account going to misplace it. I have faced many teething troubles, many snake oils people but luckily, I am out of all the dilemmas in my life and that’s impressive. Now the sparkling day has come when I have become advanced to a greater extent, a pace more for advancing my future. I will show consideration for one and all, share cheerfulness with all and sundry and lend a hand to whole world. But without divinity it is impossible, and I am 101% sure you are with me god 😊. My life is mine each and every instant what I have suffered is adjusted by me to get out of that situation... - the silent soul