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EXILE I lie on my cot out in the balcony, late night cool breeze lulling me to sleep; The super-blood-flower moon glows in its effervescent crimson hue. A rather vivid dream ensues from the deep. A thousand years in exile. I see you, I talk to you Yet, never can I come near you. Your charm and grace melted my frosty cold heart, Only for this barrier to swerve the flow away from you. This screen though transparent would always be there, for a millenium or so. Have I cursed myself? Which of us is caged? Or are we both shackled by past fears? This fear strengthens this impediment; We know it, yet we're anxious to strike it down. How cruel is this? To be so near yet so far, Neither absolute sadness nor utter delight. How am I to handle this? To look away would only disquieten the longingness; My vision is blurred, Nothing can I see except the screen that separates us. What grand design could this be? Or just misfortune that I yearn for someone never meant for me? Why does it feel so hollow? The void, consuming me from within. Knowing parts of you but restricted from the whole, breaks my heart; Eventhough I have something, I'd rather have never known you. Having a little piece but never able to have it whole, Drains me, weakens me, exhausts me. Not death nor sorrow, Neither life nor joy, Just this bit of hope and longing to continue, In my thousand year exile! A sudden jolt wakens me. The moon is restored to it's bright white glow, The eclipse is over, the mind goes blank; The breeze withers slowly as clouds follow, Ushering in a light drizzle, pitter-pattering onto the wooden plank. ©FL5 #review

You never know with whom you red string of fate is connected to. They may be right in front of you for your whole life, but you fail to recognize them, until the right moment. It just takes a moment to fall in love, but a lifetime to maintain it. "I told you, you can't escape me baby. Your fate has been entangled with me since that day." Kim Yoona was shocked by the words uttered by Lee Jihun. He sounded so controlling and cold. He wasn't like this before. But after that day, everything changed between them. This is my second novel. I've just written a chapter, but I need reviews and suggestions. #review

You came unto me, like the moonlight, somehow turned to slowly mean life itself, while these lines kept coming to me everyday, we'd awakened without us knowing Are you my sunlight or rain? My shelter or the cold breeze, My petals or my leaf, Or the nectar of my dreams? Are you my night or day? My pair or my pillar, Come unto me as the colours of my rainbow! #review

ONE FINE DAY... So what's the point. Eventually it's all gonna end. Ultimately it's gonna be over. If not today, maybe tomorrow. In a year? Two year? Ten years? Fifty years? Nobody lives for 100 years anymore. So all we do here is just a series of planning, preparing, hoping and dreaming of a tomorrow which may or may not come. And blinding throwing wishes in the air that tomorrow will come. And it may or may not come. Eventually one day it will stop coming. All those empty promises of tomorrow. And one fine day… We all cease to exist. Until that day all we do is waste our today in the hopes of tomorrows. #review

"What's better than a warm bath---" Chen Xixi stopped dead in her tracks when she noticed a man lying on her bed, with his head on his palm. "Welcome back baby~" Jiang Sheng purred in a deep voice. "The fu*k you doing here?" Chen Xixi was so angry that she could faint. "Chill darling. I'm here to surprise you. Don't you like it?" "Yeah I loved it. Let me return the favor." Xixi pounced at Jiang Sheng and locked him in a choke hold. "How many times I have told you to get lost?" "Let go you stupid girl. You'll leave marks on my beautiful neck" Chen Xixi wasn't able to hold him for a long time though. "Crazy woman! Are you that jealous of my appearance?." Sheng was checking in the mirror if his neck had any marks. "Hah! Stop spouting nonsense and get your dumbass out of my room. You contaminated my bed with your germs. Ewww" "I'm doing my job ok? I was instructed to surprise my 'fan' who stays in this hostel room. It was from a VVVIP investor of my recent drama. Heavens must hate me that you're my fan." "Your fan? You've finally lost it. I'll gladly kiss a pig then to see your face one more time. Who told you I'm your fan?" "Your family." 'What the actual heck!' You're welcome to join this hate-love relationship journey of Chen Xixi and Jiang Sheng, will they find together a cure called LOVE? This is the synopsis of my novel. If anyone is interested to read it, DM me for the link. #review

A gush of breath A space and time continuum, Where visions are disproportionate. Blown out of order, In a vision only called perspective. Irregularities in the face, Slipping ground under the feet. Words that keep you afloat, Sensations that make me come alive. A drip on the surface Or under the surface, All but a part of one. Learning to breathe the suffocating air, Will never be the same as actually breathing. Learning to just be, Will never be the same as being alive. A constant to and fro motion that pulls me apart at the seems, Is the way of being alive And if we are ever all alive? #review

You may not always have a comfortable life. And you will not always be able to solve all the world’s problems all at once. But don’t ever underestimate the impact you can have, because history has shown us that courage can be contagious, and hope can take on a life of its own. #review

She had new red shoes and egyptian eyes; and my heart. She liked poems & chocolates & surprises; and my smile. She wore a blouse that matched her shoes and eyes; and she . . . was married #review

EAVESDROPPING The banal, midnight architecture of this high-rise building suddenly enlivened by the inspired sounds of crashing saucers followed by the raised, accusative tone of a man in rage, matched sharply by a feminine voice, quivering & high-pitched, in turn, the machine gun of their mouths firing everywhere and nowhere, invisible blood splattered across the living room walls; after about ten minutes, a low hush descends upon the floor, and one hears only the occasional screech of an elevator ferrying the late-night home comers up and down the apartment, like a weaving loom shuttle, even as the wounded couple curl up to their separate beds, tossing and turning uneasily, each unsure, whether to regard all of this as a proof of love or its absence. #review

#review The way you penned. It's good. The pain is really unbearable. As a good human being. We should pray for everyone and hope for the best. Let's be positive and spread it as much as we can nandini.!

When i saw you for first time you were looking like an angle of night. i was standing there drinking my tea that you don't even like. I still remember your beautiful eye's big smile and you lips telling me to not even try. watching you go back with your friends was so hard so i told myself let's just try. My hands were shivering my mind was high when i ask you can i talk to you for a while just want to let you know that while was enough because that day you replied. Guys I'm new in this please tell if if there's any mistakes and how can i improve #review

"I am the one Beyond this planet beyond the sun Reasonable with my every turn" - With arrogance A father commanding his son. Delicate with heart, Quiet easily hurt Not showing the pain, just striving to gain Son nodded - Thought his Father's word rain Knowledge The one beyond this planet Beyond the sun, accepted by his son Continues again -"Your trembling your fears, It ruins my name". Since then Been 20 years that fear those tears made him a monster that can't be tamed. #review