Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4839 · 01/28/2021, 03:43 PM
Hey everyone!
I am writing a novel on gender equality. Here's an excerpt:
Could you really lay me down on a death bed?
For all the sins I haven't even done.
Making myself vulnerable was a mistake I became an opportunity not a concern.
Those mere guesses about how I might look;
Those stares directed towards.
Your piercing glances to look through the covers; would tear apart my life behind bars.
-an excrept from the script
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4830 · 01/26/2021, 04:51 PM
Man
your vibe really touches the soul.
U got the writer’s Spirit
Keep it up!
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4816 · 01/25/2021, 06:48 AM
The Big Investments
Invest right. And collect the benefits all along the way.
Invest wrong and gamble today. Suffer tomorrow.
Why not invest right.
Investment, one should realise, is not of a material, but of the attitude with which you invested the material.
Invest the attitude of compassion for all. And not the attitude of insecurity and greed.
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4810 · 01/24/2021, 03:49 PM
SOVEREIGNTY OF BEING COURTEOUS
In today's vast society, people are inhabiting their life to fulfil something that they force to do. one's among millions of people have only had the paunch to do that they truly want. That is the main reason for rising suicidal rate in past years.
People should be empathetical to one another regardless of superiority factors. Everyone is born with their unique features so we must accept others as they are, to do so firstly, we need to accept ourselves the way we are and what we do and don't try to fit in the wrong territory.
Captivating societal supremacy gives us nothing but wastage of our good present days.
Be yourself and do what you love maybe it is not pertinent for some people who bound to do things as a part of their responsibility facets. To avoid such circumstances everyone should work for themselves and don't accept things from others. let them do what they truly want and free them from your breadths. If we Didn't change ourselves then none can be do something for us
Don't let your narrow mentality spoil yourself and other people around you. it might be your son daughter wife sister brother or even your subordinate don't fetch their unique power to fulfil your selfish needs, it might take only seconds to change our decision but perhaps from that decision you might able to give them their true selves,
Power of being most gracious human is one of the momentous things we need to spread into this conservative society, don't treat your subordinates as your slave and your children as the means of living life you wished for and controlling your wife as the robot made to please you.
Try to rectify yourself and make a difference and eventually you will understand how incredible is our tiny human lives of this profound Universe.
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4804 · 01/23/2021, 08:40 AM
The flesh on your body,
I'm not an animal which you think I'm,
It doesn't excite me anymore,
The feeling of getting lost as you take off your shirt,
Cold nights are longer than warm nights,
I stared at you when you were naked next to me,
I couldn't figure out,
Am I an artist with broken fingers?
The stroke of my brush,
The way I look at you,
The way I feel about you,
I can try to draw,
I can try to express,
But, you won't understand if you don't feel the same,
Our hearts mind change,
You might fall for me later,
Or long before you realise that I was the rain you wanted to feel on your skin,
I'll be gone,
Don't regret it,
Look at the shining sun,
It'll rain again but it won't feel the same,
The odour of body,
The curves of your waist,
As my brush makes it smoothly,
The smile on your face,
As hair falls on your face,
Your elbows cross and cover your chest,
I left the brush and pulled that blanket up,
You grabbed my hand like a baby,
I couldn't resist but to accept, you're my baby.
I was a gambler who was trying to win back what I've lost,
But there's nothing I've been losing.
I won you.
You are laying next to me,
As I lay next to you,
Keep your hand in my hand,
I kiss your forehead and sleep.
~Luci
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4802 · 01/23/2021, 07:18 AM
In my better days ,I'm just fine,
With a couple peace hours and maybe more
No breath around is what I adore
To God,
I whisper my desires
He replies with no word
And then we share a good laugh
There is so much, to him I complain about
And then in return he reminds me of my meals
And this is how the cycle repeats
I tell him how lonely sometimes it be,
to have so many brains around and no heart to remind you to live
And what a misery it is to sit disgusted in the hall of chaos and I wonder how I sustain
But then again He reminds me of myself , to go beyond the set aesthetics , but only when you know,you know ,your true self
then to him I reply with no word
And we share a good laugh
In the end
I ask him to often give me a visit
In my better days
In my better days
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4801 · 01/23/2021, 07:10 AM
In my better days ,I'm just fine,
With a couple peace hours and maybe more
No breath around is what I adore
To God,
I whisper my desires
He replies with no word
And then we share a good laugh
There is so much, to him I complain about
And then in return he reminds me of my meals
And this is how the cycle repeats
I tell him how lonely sometimes it be,
to have so many brains around and no heart to remind you to live
And what a misery it is to sit disgusted in the hall of chaos and I wonder how I sustain
But then again He reminds me of myself , to go beyond set aesthetics , but only when you know,you know your true self
then to him I reply with no word
And we share a good laugh
In the end
I ask him to often give me a visit
In my better days
In my better days
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4788 · 01/21/2021, 05:20 PM
If I were you
I wonder how life would be,
Maybe a little easier and a lot better
With gentle reminders of not being ashamed
Of what you are , what you seek, how high can be one's peak, we would live not in fragments but in peace
When dazzling lights would lead you to dark
When beings alive would leave you dead inside
You and I, we would be to mountains,
With weeds outgrown and daffodils whistling,
"To not care, to not care, we live once "
And we would repeat behind chasing the wind and unseen heights ,
"Oh!, to not care,to not care, we come to you, we come to you, up here , so shy, no eye may see us live, see us breath"
Then when a sweetheart butterfly would kiss our cheeks , with joy , with joy, a goodbye we would wave
to again live in fragments till to live in peace .
If I were you,
I wonder how life would be
How life would be
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4787 · 01/21/2021, 02:53 PM
(Hello world,)
:
Ahh..life,
Well its not fair that I know,
What the hell am i supposed to do?
Shit just keep coming to me out of the blue,
I have feelings but few,
There's this deep down feeling to pursue,
Why is it so alone here?
They promised me friends,
They promised me angels,
They promised people of different blends,
But there are only betrayals,
They said i will find true love,
But all i see here is desperation.
Inside me,
I want to hug someone tight,
I want to kiss her forehead,
Where is my light?
All promises all dreams are now fading away,
Leaving me here ,
In the darkness of my insecurities.
But no..
They promised.
#poetry#poetry #asthir#asthir#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4773 · 01/20/2021, 07:36 AM
LGBTQ
"Unlike poles attract.
Like poles repel."
Though practically true
but it's not the concept of life as well!
Some men love men.
Some women love women.
Strange, isn't it?
Now think deeply,
"What if there were no bodies
of skin and flesh?"
The word 'gender'
wouldn't be in existence!
No restriction to have
inclination for anyone!
This is what genuine love is.
Love is blind.
Indeed, it is!
Blind enough not to see the gender
of the heart!
Unfortunately, our society doesn't appreciate
this way of loving!
Our society degrades the unique hearts
that beat differently.
Some beautiful souls
in confused bodies
feel embarrassed to accept themselves
because we as a society of humans
fail to understand humans..!!
We classify the human race
as men and women.
What about those
who are blessed to be both?
We make their life pathetic
but actually we should be empathetic!
Their presence is a blessing
and not something disgusting!
They are not the curse to society
but ignorance is a curse!
Educating the society
before forcing their acceptance
is necessary!
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4762 · 01/18/2021, 12:35 PM
And when the sky birthed clouds
Over horizon until reached the sun
A waterfall she cried
To swirl with moon , her mere desire
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4751 · 01/17/2021, 08:02 AM
I already knew that I was different that my body isn't made for the crowd that my mind belongs underneath oceans that my name isn't worth remembering that my heart belongs to no one.
I already knew that there's a chance that I would live alone, agonize alone, cry alone, die alone but that doesn't make me feel lonely.
I think what would make feel lonely is to have someone, just because I'm afraid to walk further all by myself.
I don't want something that is not genuine.
I don't want to give something that is not genuine.
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