Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5590 · 01/07/2022, 01:12 PM
Do you see me?
Do you see my body?
Does it interest you?
Do you feel it too?
Do you see me?
Do you see my mouth?
Do you like the words?
Or just the way it sounds?
Do you see me?
Do you see these eyes?
Do you see the pain ?
Do you see what it hides?
Do you see me?
Do you see these scars?
Do you hear the stories they tell?
Do you think I have gone too far?
Do you see me?
Do you see my mind?
Do you think I'm crazy?
But isn't it just what you like?
Do you see me?
Do you see my imperfections?
Would you still love me?
I ask my reflection.
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5584 · 01/03/2022, 08:05 PM
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5582 · 01/03/2022, 12:10 PM
Today I saw death in the eyes, she smiled at me and told me that he loved me.
Today I saw death in the eyes, I felt fragile and small.
Today I saw death in the eyes, I don't want to look at it again.
Today I saw death in the eyes and she looked back at me.
I'm not prepared for the slow walk of her.
I'm scared, for all the things I left behind.
I let out a slow sigh! I don't want to stop breathing.
But here I face her, with a true sigh.
And I suffer at the same time, for what I lack to love.
Oh! Death now that you are looking at me, touch my soul and spare my life.
Oh! Reason in misery, focus your mind, death is not looking at you.
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5579 · 01/02/2022, 01:30 PM
He scribbled.
She gave meaning to it.
Mysteriously they became an art!
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5577 · 12/30/2021, 04:06 PM
His surviving words had lifeless meaning.
But her music was certain.
Mysteriously, their song gave hope! #review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5575 · 12/30/2021, 09:17 AM
His surviving words had lifeless meaning.
But her music was certain.
Mysteriously, their song gave hope! #review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5574 · 12/29/2021, 07:20 PM
Once we lived in a dark realm,
Striving for happiness and surviving until we found our soul.
Searching for paths with scars,
We found the most anxious one and the most unpredictable one.
It was our past and our future… #review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5573 · 12/29/2021, 07:12 PM
From a blank page to, 'you are the reason for this book'.
He realized,
She was his poem! #review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5572 · 12/29/2021, 07:24 AM
Some nights I think about being a ghost yk? It'd be so much better. Maybe if I were a ghost I won't have these tears to hide? Maybe I won't feel any of this pain? Maybe I'll stop having these nightmares? Maybe it'll all stop? I'll just exist without actually having to have an existence. Maybe I'll live longer? Maybe I'll survive?
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5568 · 12/29/2021, 04:44 AM
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Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5565 · 12/28/2021, 02:51 PM
Those sparkling eyes of yours,
Are like the stars in limitless sky.
Everytime you get close,
I get high of you.. thinking I could fly
Everytime you look into my eyes
I know what exactly you want to say
All my life I've been thinking
That talking is the only way
Now all those words and all those gestures seems cheap
Your eyes makes more sense to me
I know I'm falling in deep
#review
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5561 · 12/28/2021, 10:28 AM
To the one I loved, its been years but I am still clung to the old memories. Those beautiful memories which were the reason to brighten up even in my darkest times, now are the reason to throw me in the depression's lap. Are you happy with my absence? You might be, but I am not. I feel you in each breath and see you in each dreams. "nothing can separate us" the promise you made came true but in dreams. Last night, the warmth of your love swept through my face and took me back to the years of our togetherness. The day when you pushed me back in reality, it hit me hard enough for me to hate myself to the core.
#review