Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4763 · 01/18/2021, 01:31 PM
Title - 7 things survived the fire
The things which survived the fire
Are the ones I love the most
It is all smoke around me
And it feels like I'm a ghost
There was this dried rose flower
You gave me when we were out the first time
The look at the face of that flower girl
She was confused and giggled like a wind chime
Then the book on the table
I use to read when you behaved like a child
You use to make faces because you never liked it
My house is burning but I still smiled.
Then your loose t-shirt on a hanger
The one which was your favorite and you never wear
It feels more comfortable with every wash
And now I can smell the fire in the air
Then there was this empty fish tank
The one in which Phoebe used to swim
It's empty now after she died
Now the daylight outside is dim
Then the white locket of mine
The one which has my name over it
I always wore it but I don't anymore,
The oxygen is low and it feels like I should quit
Then the empty photo frame
Which used to have a picture of you
I have all the thing in my hand now
And I'm on the floor with them too
Now I hear sirens and people shouting
And devils picked me up wearing red attire
Now I'm in the hospital bed alone in the room
And people outside are saying that 7 Things survived the fire.
#review#vishal#poetry
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4750 · 01/17/2021, 07:28 AM
The backspace !
Both were online.
He started typing.
She saw the word 'typing'.
Her eyes were staring
to the lightning surface.
He kept on tapping the
letters whatever appear on
his screen of mind.
The way he was writing commas,
it seems that
he was about to empty his brain,
he was about to bring out his pain.
The girl having a pupil
fully filled with curiosity
Has holding a patience
On her folded fingers.
And he stopped.
And he finished.
For a bit, he scrolled over his sentences.
For a bit, he ran all over through spaces.
And he decided.
Selected whole text,
and pressed 'backspace' !
She'd seen a 'last seen at' under his name.
He wanted to.
But he couldn't. Kept phone on desk.
But she smiled.
Because she knows
he'll tell one day.
He has to tell.
And she closed her eyes to sleep.
And she breathes feeling to deep.
Because
The feeling of
waiting for something or someone
Is the most pleasant
Feeling among all.
- Jaimeen
#review#jaimeen#poetry
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4790 · 01/21/2021, 09:56 PM
*Who Am I*
Ah! This drizzling rain
Those lovely skies
I love it all
I don't know why
These twinkling stars
That lovely moon
I wanna see them
Even in the noon
I wanna run
I wanna fly
Do everything possible
Before I die
That's what a part of me
Always says
The part I wish could
Forever stay
But in this world
That's not the case
Like every coin
I have another face
The one which is scared
The one which is shy
Wanting to be heard
Almost ready to cry
That me doesn't have
A place to go
Neither when I burn
Nor when I glow
I spend nights wondering
Which of them is right
I often put them in a battlefield
But they refuse to fight
So now I'm really confused
I don't know why
All I wanna know is
who am I ..
#review#everyone#poem
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4740 · 01/16/2021, 12:50 PM
#review
Resurrection
I am dead
Cut down by their sharpened saw
Through my silent pleas they hacked me raw
Punished me without a flaw
I offered them flowers and juicy fruit
But they resorted to violent brute
Causing me agony and pain acute
But my roots are deep and hurt they are not
My seeds spread and eventually sprout
Tiny shoots and a trunk stout
And I am alive.
#poem#ranjiwrites
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5382 · 08/27/2021, 07:36 AM
#review
#iwritesometimes
#poetry
#mans
Let me kiss your soul for once,
And gently cradle the corners of your heart,
Engrave you by colors, with your name between my lips,
And in a mirror you'll see the greatest masterpiece of art.
~ IWRITESOMETIMES
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4885 · 02/07/2021, 03:36 PM
#THe_Rob...
#quote
#review
Love if Rains
How much wet will u get?
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4818 · 01/25/2021, 11:46 AM
#THe_Rob
#quote
#review
1)I am not in love with your worldly attire ,
I love your soul , your voice
(Mujhe Pyaar nahi hai tumhare duniyawi Libaaz se ,
Mujhe Mohabbat hai tumhari Rooh se, Tumhari Awaaz se. )
2)I tried to forget you but this thought brought your thought back.
( Socha Tumhe Bhool jayun
Par ye Khyaal bhi Tumhara Khyaal hai la de rha )
3)Since we parted ‘
eternal pain in heart has started.
4) The long I live
The long you will have atleast one who love.
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4812 · 01/24/2021, 05:35 PM
The roots of thy vices
shalt be slashed with dagger
of thy utmost morality
for tis but an illusion that
thou consider thyself a saint
dressed in extravagance!
#review#grace#quote
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #4781 · 01/20/2021, 03:49 PM
WHAT LAY BENEATH.
At first they thought it was all fun and games. They paid no heed to the advice their parents millions of times gave. In their minds, they had to try it out. They had find out what lay beneath. They wanted to know what little creatures crawled behind those old crumbling walls of that house at HILLPOINT, the house their grand parents told them is haunted.
They wanted to know what demon slept their. They wanted to know what monsters bellowed all night- but most of all, they wanted to prove the legend. Curiosity killed the cat.
So on the night of December 31st, 1998, the threesome__ one girl, two boys all not older than 14__ climbed up the winding hill to the old rotting house that stared them back menacing, evil- diabolical. It was like it wanted to quench a thirst for blood. And there coming, down the winding road, where three ignorant little kids. Fools.
When they approached the house, 10 feet maybe, an owl hooted, the harbinger of death. A warning none of the three took. They had to explore, they had to find out. It was like the house had a magical magnet pull that reached out to their souls, it pulled them, 5 feet now.
For a hill, it was too silent, no wind, and no creatures in the grass sang their evening songs. It was 6PM. It was like the creatures knew the house reeked of death, so they kept away. Even the wind. The atmosphere was dry_barren.
The girl finally broke the silence,
"Let's go home guys!" She nudged the boys, her voice trembling. But they heard nothing, they were hypnotised. They didn't have control over themselves. The house smiled. It's windows so dark, no sign of life inside. No sign of anything good. They still didn't care.
She spoke up again, this time taking a step backwards, holding the teddy bear she always carried with her even tighter, "Come on guys, let's go back!" She almost screamed and cried. She stamped her feet on the ground. They didn't care. They had to get it and maybe greet the devil that lived in that old ragged house.
"Go home Suzy." One of the boys replied and continued "adventures aren't for the weak at heart."
He didn't even bother to look back as he said this. His gaze was only on the house, his and the other boy's mouths feel agape, as if they were awe struck. There eyes devilishly black, no sense of humanity left in them. None at all. They now belonged to the house. Their souls doomed to be trapped in it forever.
One step close to the door. The taller of the boys opened it. It let out a long menacing and satanic Creek, as if it were laughing at them. For being foolish preferably.
Once opened, it let out a strong gush of air that sucked the boys in. They screamed! But it was too late.
And while Suzy stood their crying, weeping and sobbing, at the window, she saw two glows, red in color. The monster stared at her. The demon lusted for her. She felt the pull and towards the house she went, like a zombie. Doomed to die. At the hands of whatever lay beneath.
They got their answers, but they didn't live long enough to evaluate them.
#review#AI#ShortStory
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5796 · 06/01/2022, 02:03 PM
Realize
Why do we ignore the the chirruping of birds?
Why do we overlook the open sky?
Has all the beauty diminished?
Or is it us who are missing all this lately?
Why do we curb all the curiosity?
Why do we assume everything is for eternity?
Has all the freshness gone?
Or is it us who neglect?
Why do we lack gratefulness for love?
Why do we take our relationships for granted?
Has all the compassion, novelty, curiosity, beauty faded?
Or is it us who do not realize their presence?
Observe, feel, be grateful
And live this life to the fullest
#review
#poem
#ecstatic
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5259 · 06/03/2021, 09:04 AM
I blushed, I cried
You spoke my tears dried;
The child in me came back,
Emotions long lost, returned;
You giggled, you whispered,
Leaving me mesmerized and lustred
#review#poem#FL5
Pensive|@PensivePost · Post #5257 · 06/03/2021, 06:55 AM
Sunny hot in the day
Breezy cold in the night,
Laying down on the hay
Mesmerized by the sight;
Behold, the stars fall,
Disappearing before I connect you on call.
#review#poem#FL5